It seems females are not so easy to omit their loves in the past that they usually update their boyfriends through Google or public connection on Yahoo360, Facebook…
The company, Yasni in
62% of the females stated that they were still having liaison with their old boyfriends while only 46% of the males were taking care of their old partners’ life at present.
“Curiosity is a natural personality. It makes people desire to know all information about the person whom they don’t like or their private relationship they used to have in the past.” Professor Steffen Ruehl , Yasni company explained.
The result of this survey has got in sympathy with people who use internet. They also affirm this rate must be higher.” I often type my old girlfriend’s name or her nickname on the internet and sometimes wish her life now is worster than mine. Moreover, I am able to get information about the girl whom I am going to hang out with through Google.”, the member Rane of InventorSpot web said.
3 comments:
Well..That's a lovely topic..I think It's mostly about females thinking in a spiral way and males thinking in a gradual way..
Females may get lost in the moment and hope it might last forever. While a guy maybe so busy trying to find a way to get things to the next level..For an example, he loves a she; He thinks how to make her love him back then he might be thinking how to make his family accept her and love her as well and then and only then may he think about a proposal or something,lol I'm talking about decent guys here by the way,. A female, on the other hand, might only worry about how to make him happy and how to linger in this certain moment as long as possible,lol that usually happens after she hesitates for a huge amount of time and makes his life hell before she tells him she loves him,.umm I'm not sure but maybe that's the secret of their beauty that attracts us, super anxious guys,to them...Who knows !!
In simple words..to me, most of the guys, not all of them, tend to move on as fast as can be..and most girls, not all of them, tend to take more time to let go of past experiences..
With the availability of the stalk as you go websites, I'm a proud member of them by the way :D, Females and males tend to recall and relive some of their gut feelings about those from the past in regular basis..
In a relevant issue..Curiousity is accused to be one of the reasons of guys or girls trying to keep track of their parteners' personal life development.. To me, that's not curiousity,curiousity is meant to lead us to new discoveries and findings, ..It's emptiness.. The most complicated problem A man/woman can face is their problem with familiarity..For an example, when a person gets empty they tend to go back to what's familiar..That could be a partener he lost or an experience he passed by..That's when he/she starts to visit a photo album or an internet search engine trying to refind a familiar feeling they had..And off course,since the feeling is gonna come back strong and fade very fast,it'll eventually be replaced by regret ,sorrow or contempt..
To me, there is always a way out of emptiness even if you're literally empty..When you're blue, you can always do something new,learn something new or know someone new..
The essence of unfamiliarity brings about the joy of a new experience, perception or maybe a chance for a new life..Just keep yourself ready for changes , question the chances very fast and grasp as much as you can of this life because you might be able to reach the happiness you always yearned to have..who knows!! you might be able to pack as much as you can carry of love,joy,harmony and freedom..And as my father always said to me when I was young.. "only those who are foolish enough will hesitate when it's very clear in front of their hearts,as they don't realize how these chances could change their lives"
Well..That's about it..Plz correct my passage..and give me some feedback if you want the topic to flow..
Always,
Ahmed Hossam Ibrahim
..A.k.A..Energizer..
Hi Jane,
Great stuff ! Here are my feedback comments:
1) It seems females are not so easy to omit their loves in the past - It seems that women don't easily forget their past loves/past lovers/ex lovers?
2) Yasni - What type of company is this? - It should be: Yasni, a market research company,(put the type of company here)
3) 21% evied - 21% were jealous? Envy or Jealousy is the noun - adjective = envious or jealous. I would use jealous rather than envious in this case.
4)having liaison - perhaps 'meeting with) is better here or make liaison plural.
5)The result of this survey - Make a new paragraph here.
6)The result of this survey has got in sympathy with people who use internet. - The results of this survey have struck a chord with people who use the internet.
7)now is worster than mine - worse than mine
Very good, make sure you check through for plurals and also make new paragraphs for new ideas in your text.
Hi Energizer,
Here is your feedback.
1)females thinking in a spiral way and males thinking in a gradual way. - what do you mean by spiral?
2)he loves a she - perhaps he loves her or a guy loves a girl
3)Make new paragraphs for new ideas.
4)Don't write LOL in the TOEFL :-)lol
5)Use a woman rather than female
6)stalk - stalker?
7)partener - partner
8)gonna - spoken not written English
Good but make your sentences a little shorter. You express yourself very well and it made me feel quite sad reading it actually ! I agree with you, we all like to feel what is familiar, although we say we like change... Well done :-)
Jessie Teacher
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