The article is about Hilary clinton's visit to the asian most polluting countries to discuss the global warming issue..
she started her tour with Japan .. and as the trip goes ,she is going to visit the asian tigers and she will end her trip in China.
This trip comes in clinton's continous efforts to seize the global warming issue.
The journalist finally states that both the united states in addition to china make contributions toalmost 40 percent of the devastating universal problem.
Tuesday, February 17, 2009
Guardian Article
On the Guardian article http://llcitypeople.com/media/The_Guardian_Feb15.pdf . Energizer Abama wrote:
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Hi Energizer,
Here are some comments for you:
1. Don't forget capital letters for people's names - Hilary Clinton
2. Word order - The most polluting Asian countries, or the the most polluting countries in Asia
3. She (capital letter)
4. Clintons (capital letter)
5. Countries always have capital letters
6. to almost - space
Very good effort !
Jessie Teacher
Also Energizer and any other students - every Monday Grammar Girl posts some tips and hints on writing on the main blog
http://blog.languagelab.com/
Enjoy -
Jessie Teacher
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